Absolutely stunning writing - your balance of scene and exposition is perfect. Your descriptions are powerful and visceral. I loved reading this, thank you!
I adore this piece too - such a beautiful, potent essay. “We drank until we felt like we could do anything— like fight cars and love each other.” Congratulations, Ash!
Whoah
Absolutely stunning writing - your balance of scene and exposition is perfect. Your descriptions are powerful and visceral. I loved reading this, thank you!
Oof I had to quickly read through the incision, excellent writing
This is inexplicably powerful. "The hollows under my eyes rhyme with the new contours on my stomach I’m supposed to want." Genius.
This is incredible
I adore this piece too - such a beautiful, potent essay. “We drank until we felt like we could do anything— like fight cars and love each other.” Congratulations, Ash!
Whew! Colorful, direct, gripping. Excellent.
Great story telling. I'm all hot now. Really terrific!
I adore this piece. So much rawness and the imagery is brilliant.