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Beautiful story of returning to oneself. Elegant on the craft level: 2nd person POV, the structure of threes, the opening and closing mirrored metaphors. Well done!

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There are exactly three likes on this post as I read it, and I don’t want to add another, because that seems appropriate. Here is my like ❤️

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I love the way this makes me feel; excited for what comes after loss. Well done, Hannah!

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This story was amazing!!! - terrific writer

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Thank you for this. Selfishly, as someone navigating heartbreak two months and 12 days ago after a nearly three-year relationship, I recognize all of these feelings. One of the things that got me through those first few weeks was watching this video everyday, sometimes on repeat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0GQSJrpVhM. Thank you so much.

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Your story brought up memories of a threesome for me that was almost, but not, so very many years ago. Thanks for that visit down memory lane. Keep up with your writing, which is powerful,lovely and poignant.

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Beautiful story, fresh and exciting to read. Tugged at my heart, made me remember how I got over a past love. You’re going somewhere kid. Keep writing with your heart ❤️

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Would you explain what the emerging writer series is and requires? It says that your current writer has published a book.

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Hey! I didn’t publish a book, I had a story featured in a book, hope that clears it up

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